plane champion

 plane chamion is my story, it is a narretive NL:make my scentences flow

RT:use different senteces starters,

Plane champion 

Planes,planes,planes… wake up! Huh!! It’s your first day of work for you.what! I thought it was tomorrow! You’ve been dreaming to much!anyways get dressed!fine mom...5 minutes later. Done mom!

 Im going to work. 6 minutes later, toooot toot! The trumpets shouted for the plane inspector.when he reached me, he said what a gooby little plane! Next! Unimaginable this is the best plane ever! So i wen’t home, i lost mom, what! So then i went into the gallow sitting next to a cat then the cat gave me a magnet, so i got an idea to make an magnet plane it took me alot of time to make it with bits and bobs then i got an magnet plane! So i wen't  to the grey gloomy room i build in.

 I needed a magnat at the bottom. With  two bars at the bottom connecting to another magnet. So the magnets connect and also lift the plane so i put a few on. To lift the plane. Now to make the plane move.

 So I made a magnet spinning by metal sticks that spin on a cylinder.to make kinetic energy to make energy making the whole plane move.

Now just need to be a plane champion.

*tooot toot* the trumpet wen’t. The first plane was a helium plane. The plane inspector said. “Not bad” when he was checking my plane he said “your a plane champion”and thats how was a plane champion.

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