This was inspired by my reading Aka Reading term 2 week 8 where you make your own super hero.
I also used spin the wheel check that out on our reading tasks on the kahihatea litracy page writing week 8.
NL : be dircriptive
RT:slowly faster suddenly louder
Purpose: narrative
Audience:public
2202 24th of May China… A super hero watches the country.
Well on his brand new tv of course! His name is axojat. A axolotl fused with an ninja. Right now he’s doing the hardest part of his job.
Watching tv! Right now he’s watching a actor going to india.Broom broom as the engine grew louder.Whoosh! Off they went.A few minute passed. Oh no suddenly the truck is slowly sinking in quick sand.And no signal! I must call for axojat. Axojat Axojat Axojat
Axojat came faster then ever.He tied a rope to an root and the other end to the actor. And cut the rope so the actor flew to a nearby lake. A few days later.There was a knock on the door.It was the actor!
I shut the door and started watching television the end.
yeah this is a short story I only had 1 day basicly to do this.
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