Writing term 3 week 1

 This was a long and fun story to write but it took me alot of time to plan,draft,edit,transfer,publish.

I was almost passed the deadline!

-Deadline means time limit!

STORY TIME

Should we have zoo’s?

RT:How - action = Yellow highlight

NL: To be descriptive

Hello people, today we are talking about the good and bad side of zoo’s. Well of course i’m with both of them but let’s just carry on. So let’s get into What do zoo’s do. They have to do more things than just capture animals and put them in cages! If you did not know Zoo’s do capture near extinct animals and breed them in captivity. And sometimes release them into the wild.Which I really appreciate I just wish they did that when the moa’s were alive. They will be so cool! Anyways let’s move onto the human goodside. So we all love Zoo’s just as much as I do. We get to look at the animals they beauty of the animals. It’s so fun to look at the animals that you normally can’t see in the wild except if your in a safari.

Now moving onto the bad side of Zoo’s. Now we can’t forget about the space they take up from building the Zoo atleast. They take up alot of space that can destroy a natural habitat and making them poullutes the air with those big machines we use with levers that work on oil! The Zoo might even get bigger and mabey kill the animals already in the Zoo by the pollution! So thats it for this topic The space they take.Now the animal downside. Now how we talked before making the zoo can pollute the air and mabey kill the animals.Also animals have alot of stress form the people looking at them.And they need alot of exercise especially tigers.And their behaviors change in the zoo so why would you want to look at artifical animals?And the artificial animals get realeased into the wild they don’t know how to hunt and die put easier.Well thats all for today so bye!

Would you have zoo's? Say why in the comment!